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Your paper must demonstrate a thorough
knowledge of the content in the speeches. It must also identify and analyze the
following elements in both speeches:
1. Attention grabber – how does the speaker
get your attention? is it effective?
2. Thesis statement – is it easy to identify?
3. Main points – what is he/she claiming here?
4. Supporting materials/evidence: how does the
speaker PROVE his/her main points? What evidence is provided?
5. Appeals to ethos, pathos, and logos (how
does the speaker appeal to each of these? are the appeals effective? why or why
not?)
6. Conclusion – how does the speaker wrap it
up?
7. Did you like the speeches? Why/why not?
THIS IS A LITTLE ABOUT ME THAT I NEED TO BE OUTLINED
THIS ESSAY IS ABOUT ME
I was bullied as a kid because I had bad-looking teeth and my parents didn’t have enough money to get me braces. I was bullied all my elementary school years and middle school. I come from a low-income family that makes enough money to make ends meet. Living from check to check and dental insurance doesn’t cover everything and the copay is expensive. Because it’s so expensive I go to the dentist once every two years when I was growing up. This is when I knew I wanted to be a dentist for low-income communities. No child should be laughed at or bullied because their teeth are not perfect. I got my braces when I was 20 years old and the average age to get braces is 9-14 years old. Poor oral health is very high in low-income communities and I want to help fight this problem when I become a dentist. Growing up I had to work more than the average child. I started working when I was 15 but with state regulations, I could only work certain hours. But when I turned 18 I worked more than 40 hours sometimes 70 hours in one week while in high school. I work to support my siblings and parents. My mom has a herniated disc and lower back pain but she fell at work in 2019 and hasn’t been the same since. During freshman year my grades were terrible because I was working 40 hours a week to help my family out. I cried and cried because I ended up with a 2.75 GPA and this really discouraged me I thought I was never going to be a dentist. But I decided not to give up because I could bring it up over my next 3 years in college. I bought it up to a 3.38 GPA and I have lowered my hours down to 25 hours a week. My mom works in pain but one day it will be over and that’s what I pray to god about. She is working while I finish up my junior year because this is the most important year for me in my college years. One thing about me is that I know I may not have the highest GPA or the highest DAT score but I will always try my best. I will always work harder than the average student because I don’t have as much time as others but I will always keep trying. Even if I fail a class I’ll try again and again and again because I’m not going to give up I’m a fighter. I want to make a difference so I will and it doesn’t matter how many times I fall what matters is getting up every time. If I can’t run I will jog, if I can’t jog I will walk, if I can’t walk I will crawl, but what I will not do is stop moving.
I recently went on a mission trip with my school’s ministry to El Paso, TX to learn about immigration issues. When I was volunteering at the shelter I learned that ICE doesn’t give them the basic things they need like toothpaste, toothbrush, enough diapers, food, water, etc. There were a few people that came up to me asking for pain medicine because they had pain in their mouths. This made me think of having a dental clinic in the shelter so they could get cleanings, extractions, temporary crowns, and more. This was a very humbling experience because I took simply brushing my teeth for granted.
Being a first-generation college student has been difficult and my freshman year of college GPA and overall GPA reflects that. I had to work full time and go to school full time so I didn’t have as much time to study as my fellow peers. Freshman year of college my dad was involved in a really bad car accident and he couldn’t work for months so I had to work to put food on the table, pay the bills, and make sure the mortgage payment was paid on time. After six months my dad was able to go back to work and I was able to focus more on my classes but I couldn’t redo my first year of school; I had to move on and hope for the best. Fast forward to my junior year of college I was diagnosed with supraventricular tachycardia (SVT) and had to have surgery because I had two episodes that I had to go to the hospital for. Being in and out of the hospital put me behind in my classes and being out for surgery/recovery made it worst. Despite all of these roadblocks, I wasn’t going to give up on becoming a dentist. Sometimes life has many ways of testing your willpower to see if you’re going to stick it out or give up. When I was younger I made a promise to myself to become a dentist and help lower-income families have access to affordable (or free) dental care. I went through a lot of bullying growing up for the way my teeth looked because my parents couldn’t afford braces until I was nineteen and I don’t wish that experience on any child. I hope you take this into consideration when reviewing my application.
